Sunday, January 29, 2012

Week 23 Blog 2A: Another Write-Like Poem

TASK: Write a write-like poem using “The Taxi” or “Love Without Love” as your model. Last week’s poem should have been about a childhood memory involving platonic love between parent/child. This week’s poem should be about a reflection on the nature of romantic love. What does love mean to you?

Your poem can be rhymed or in free-verse. Post your poem in comments below, and also send a copy of it to Mr.Sabath via email.

Model Poems:

Love Without Love
-Luis Lloréns Torres

I love you, because in my thousand and one nights of dreams,
I Never once dreamed of you.
I looked down paths that traveled from afar,
but it was never you I expected.
Suddenly I've felt you flying through my soul
in quick , lofty flight,
and how beautiful you seem way up there, far
from my always idiot heart!
Love me that way, flying over everything.
And, like the bird on its branch, land in my arms
only to rest,
then fly off again.
Be not like the romantic one who,
In love, set me on fire.
When you climb up my mansion,
enter so lightly, that as you enter
the dog on my heart will not bark. 



The Taxi

BY AMY LOWELL
When I go away from you
The world beats dead
Like a slackened drum.
I call out for you against the jutted stars   
And shout into the ridges of the wind.   
Streets coming fast,
One after the other,
Wedge you away from me,
And the lamps of the city prick my eyes
So that I can no longer see your face.
Why should I leave you,
To wound myself upon the sharp edges of the night?



8 comments:

  1. diamond harris 2A

    love, what is love?
    Is love what makes us happy?
    Is love what makes us angry?
    Well personally i think love is both.

    Love should be wild, and free
    Love should make "YOU" not be "YOU"
    It should make you better

    So again, i ask "YOU"
    What is love?
    You should respond
    Love is everything, both good, and bad

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  2. I'vahanna Burrell 2A

    What is LOVE ?

    Some people think "LOVE" is just "LOVE"
    but some people dont know how to show there love towards others.

    So,"LOVE" to some people is just falling in love with someone, but some love is diffcult and hard to understand.

    So, Is "LOVE" hurting or peaceful?

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  3. Destanie Green 2A
    What Is LOVE?
    LOVE Is Not Just Something You Just Play Around With.
    Do Love Mean Anything To You?
    Are You Taking It As A Joke?
    People Just Dont Express Thier Love For Eachother In Thier Relantionship.
    Love Can Be Painful Or Exciting
    What Do Love Means Too You.

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  4. Tania McCray 2-A

    LOVE..
    Does anyone know what it means?
    Love is a feeling you get insie your heart.
    Love can be happiness, or it can be sadness
    It feels good to be in love with someone
    Yes, love tends to hurt your heart but not always.
    Love is when you feel a certain way for
    a special someone
    You get butterflies in your stomach whenever
    that person comes around.
    your heart smiles and your knees weaken :-)
    when your in love you may think you found the
    right one, but you can never be so sure
    love is just..unexplainable...

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  5. Ryan Palmer
    February 4, 2012
    LOVE

    Love is a paste, love can only move as fast as you take it, whether its fast or to slow,
    Love can get you in a lot of trouble, love feeds
    your emotions, love can make you mad,it can make you happy, it can make you sad, love sometimes, causes you not to eat, sleep,

    Love can not be disrespected,love is the unsolid line seperating crazy and insane. it can make you lose everything and gain the world at the same time. At times, makes you the happiest you will ever be, and at times, confused, upset, and jealous.

    Love makes you feel like you have a reason to wake up in the morning to see that special person,and makes something for you to look forward too, and also it helps you do right things.

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  6. Darius Odom 2A Love is a type of feeling you have for someone or somethng that you cant express with words Love is when you share a part of your hart with someone Love gives you a feeling that makes you feel good everytime you think of this person How love make you think? Love might make you think of expressing yourself without a regrets to someon you truly love. So when you are asked this question what is love just tell them its no real answer to it

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  7. Desiree wheeler 2a
    when we break up
    i lose my breath
    like a astronaut without a helmet.
    i longed for you everyday
    woken up from nigthmares
    of you loving another
    we were once so happy
    stuck in the cupcake stage
    of loving each other being
    together everyday,you toke that
    away , and teased me by loving another
    why hurt someone you onced loved?

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  8. Emonni Teshome 2a

    Never wanting to be apart
    Always Longing for your touch
    Being with you is a must
    The pain I get in my gut
    When you are far

    I Dream, I Dream, I Dream
    Of You
    Unconsciously
    With Me
    This feeling is indescribable
    with No high a druggy is incomplete
    You are my high and without you
    I cant breathe

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