•What is a sonnet?
= 14 line poem
= “little song” in Italian; originated in Italy
= subject is often ROMANTIC LOVE
•What is an English/Shakespearean sonnet?
=Fixed structure (three quatrains – abab, cdcd, efef; followed by one couplet – gg
TASK: Write a sonnet about the subject of love. It needs to be 14 lines and should use the rhyme scheme above that we talked about in class. Use the poems we read in class as your models to follow when you write your own. Remember, this is a "write-like" poem, so you should try to write like the authors of the poems below. Your poem should pose a question/situation/problem, a turning point, and a resolution - just like the sonnets did that we read in class. Post your poem in the comment section below, and send to Mr. Sabath via email (peter.sabath@pgcps.org):
Sonnet 18
Shakespeare
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimm'd;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest;
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this and this gives life to thee.
Sonnet 30
Edna St. Vincent Millay
Love is not all: it is not meat nor drink
Nor slumber nor a roof against the rain;
Nor yet a floating spar to men that sink
And rise and sink and rise and sink again;
Love cannot fill the thickened lung with breath,
Nor clean the blood, nor set the fractured bone;
Yet many a man is making friends with death
Even as I speak, for lack of love alone.
It well may be that in a difficult hour,
Pinned down by pain and moaning for release,
Or nagged by want past resolution’s power,
I might be driven to sell your love for peace,
Or trade the memory of this night for food.
It well may be. But I do not think I would.
William(Be Easy)Martin Period2B
ReplyDeleteSonnet "40"
Exercise is not that important, is it?
We can't chew it or drink it until we're bloated,
It can't be fryed making my mouth water with spit,
I could eat for sport, my pockets soon loaded.
Visions of loneliness and wheelchairs haunt me,
Nightmares of I being the one consumed,
Up out of bed sprinting for the key,
To unlock the doors of hope or life is doomed,
Lifting wieghts here and there,
Counting points and measuring meals,
Aeorobics and Cardio I do my share,
Opening up a package of fresh veils,
Eat forever and grow out of my pants,
Exercise I will! For fear of ants!
Sunlight drips between dappled leaves at dawn,
ReplyDeleteAs the path gently gleams bathed in night’s dew,
In splendor we two hand in hand walk on,
Every day learning to love anew.
Radiance grows as quickly the sun climbs,
So idly we dwell along bubbling brooks,
In a far away world a church bell chimes,
And fades in the midst of the lovers’ looks.
We tire as we watch afternoon pass,
We head away as the shadows grow long,
We hear wind whistle through the deep green grass,
We know as day passes, this is our song.
Still, as the light fades and darkness takes all,
We walk as one in the forest of Fall.
We sit there in the noisy room with the lights dim
ReplyDeleteHolding hands blushing hard with no words said
Wondering what he's thinking as I stare at him
Looking in his eyes, I can tell my heart is not being misled
Music surronds us, but we can't hear a thing
Everyone's on the floor dancing but we're totally blind
It feels like he's the angel to my wing
And as our fingers entertwine
I think to myself I could spend a lifetime here
Just you and me and no one else
But if things between us change my dear
Will you be so quick as to leave me for someone else ?
Then my hearing returns for a second just to hear your lips whisper "I love you"
And just like that my dubts fade; I know in my heart this is the right thing to do.
Such little time, whatever shall I do?
ReplyDeletePlaying around,telling stories, or talking about nothing.
It doesn't matter as long as I am with you.
That's when I hear the footsteps shuffling.
We look at each other in disbelief.
Hoping and praying wishing for the best.
Then the door opens and we both sigh sigh's of relief.
Nothing more than a little pest.
Back to what we were doing.
The two of us go.
The pest went away with shooing.
Now back to the show.
Our lives and love as strong as time.
Forever it goes and we pay it no mind.
Does he even know that I am here?
ReplyDeleteIm the one who reveals myslef
when everyone else seems to disapear
im always the one to help
I realize that I cant help you
because you dont want to be helped
just know that when I say "I love you too"
that is truely how I felt
But i cant imagine me leaving you alone
but you dont like to speak your mind
its like were taking the long way home
it is a waste of time
but in my mind, I'll always be yours
Im just waiting on you to realize that you are my world
Nekia Williams 2B
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ReplyDeleteMarcus Moss 2b
ReplyDeleteThat love where you know its real
That feeling you get when she is in your presence.
Now its my job to please her, ease her, and make her smile.
Is it just me or am I going crazy over her essesce.
This is our love and its going to last longer than a while.
Late nights wasting time talking about nothing on the phone.
Your best interent is nothing but to better each other.
Always wishing to be together high off love and bold enough to sneak out your own home.
She bad, we the sh*t, we does this, and we know what we got there aint another.
Always hugging, kissing, cuddling doing whatever to express how you feel.
Having fun with each other doing anything to make us remember OUR time.
Sometimes we check to make sure its real on both ends of the deal.
I make sure to say and make her know she going to be forever mines.
This be that romantic love, that forever love, yeah its one of a kind.
We break up to make up knowing the other going to come be in little time
Janie Pratt 2B
ReplyDeleteRunning away from all of my fears
chasing the love I thought we had
pillow full of tears
never knew it would all hurt so bad
I didnt plan to be feeling all this here
these tears aint nothing
just company to my ocean full of tears
soon you'll get what's coming
Im out of tears
so there's nomore crying
finally f-cked my fears
and broke up with my lies
and til this day i scream F love
nobody in this world will ever be enough
Charles owens-wilson 2B
ReplyDeleteYou filled my life with joy,
Made my nights so memorable.
Now everything is so destroyed,
I hate that it's unforgetable.
You had my heart,
that you tore apart
never thought i would feel this way
i think about it almost everyday
i pray and pray
until the sky turns grey
through all this pain
i still remain
to have enormous feelings for you
i feel like a fool
but i just dont know what to do.
Fatima Ahmed 2B
ReplyDeleteHave you always loved me?
Your always here when i need you the most
You always made me see clearly
Even cut the crust off my toast
I've loved you since the first day we met
You filled my heart with joy
But now my heart is filled with regret
How could i not see i was just your little toy
My heart always belonged to you
I wondered how you couldn't see that
I always thought you loved me too
More then you loved your favorite hat
I'm happy with times that were rotten
Because now those days are long forgotten
Juwan Whitaker 2B
ReplyDelete"Sonnet 14"
I escaped down to the creek today .
I lost my way and wished you would come
I sat down on the grass in the sun,
In the silence I began to pray .
In the water some stepping stones lay
where my reflections just had begun .
Your presence I felt had overcome,
I was not lost and alone that day .
I walked away and stood on a stone .
In the water I saw the blue sky.
You came to me in a quiet place.
In reflective prayer I'm not alone
with the sound of water flowing by,
on stepping stones I walk in Gods grace
Tim Tebow Period2B
ReplyDeleteKiaa Hamilton, nice playgirism. Did you give credit to Matthew Khan? (http://www.helium.com/items/2168896-love-sonnet) You know people go to jail over this right? Oh, and it was easy to catch, you don't know what dappled means.
Tim Tebow Period2B
ReplyDeleteJuwan Whitacker, nice playgirism. Did you give credit to Paul Francis Mccann? (http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewPoetry.asp?id=26191)
You know people go to jail over this right? Oh, and it was easy to catch, you don't know what "reflective prayer" is.
LOL JUWAN GOT CAUGHT !
ReplyDeleteAlexia Strickland 2B
ReplyDelete"US"
Like A Dove You Flew Through My Heart
Giving Me Reasons To Believe
Our Love Would Never Depart
But Then You Changed On Me
Love Turned To Lies
Then Came Deceit And Pain
You Never Heard My Cries
Our Love Soon Turned Vein
You Changed Your ways
like a 360 spin
Laughs turned to rage
i wondered when would this end
Please Change For Me Because I Love You So Much
Go To How you used to be or there will be no US
Alexus Unique` Parker Period 2Bday
ReplyDelete"Tainted Love"
Beauty and all she promises,
Barefoot, walking on pavements of broken glass.
Love and it 's tainted kiss,
Wondering why love never lasts.
Suspended by the thinnest thread a thousand feet in the air,
Scared to fall as love's poisonus venom flows through my veins.
Afraid of the affection as you whisper in my ear.
Unknowingly being lured in the direction of Cupid's aim.
Although loving you could take my life,
I place my hand in the palm of yours.
As our hearts become tangled, yours into mine,
I feel a shock of electricity that pierces me to the core.
The wind blows and I paint the colors of this tainted love,
I close my eyes and suddenly the heavens open from above.
Kiera Jones 2B
ReplyDeleteLove is warm and cozy
Like hot soup on a cold winter day
Love is red and rosey
Like fresh picked flowers that make a beautiful bouquet
A person that makes you smile
Just to hear their voice
You would walk a mile
To see them if that was your only choice
It's not always that easy
You have to be willing to take the good with the bad
Sometimes it's like a gloomy day that's breezy
And you go to sleep mad
If you're smart you'll learn to compromise
So you won't be lonely when you're old and wise
Earl Childress 2B
ReplyDeleteOur love is so fine
Since 8.5.11 when we got together
Everything has been PURE like wine
Baby you make my life better
Love is sour
Love is sweet
Love is ours
It's that love you just can't beat
Your heart is mine
My heart is yours
I love you all the time
You love me like chocolate on smores
Our love? Yeah it's forever
Will it end? NO! Not NEVER!!!!
Is this all real?
ReplyDeleteI didn't think it was possible that I could get you
Who knew you would be apart of the deal
I guess wishes do come true
Your not like the rest
The ones that I did have were bad
You seem like the best
You never seem to make me mad
My love before has been abused
I want what we have to last forever
But this time I don't want to be used
The last guy got caught because he wasn't that clever
This time around we'll both stay true
With me baby, You'll be stuck like glue
"That Feeling"
ReplyDeleteWhat am I supposed to do?
Staring at me with those beautiful eyes.
I think I might be falling for you!
Oh! I am feeling something weird inside!
When we met each other on the street,
You walked next to me (I thought I was going to die).
You looked at me and I looked down at my feet.
I wanted to run away and hide.
Should I stop thinking about you?
This love on my shoulders weighs a ton.
Staying in this empty house alone with nothing to do
Picking petals off of a flower one by one.
No more games. you will soon see,
That us meeting was destiny.
Terrell Kornegay 2B
ReplyDeleteFrom easy rhymes that kinder-gardeners learn,
And simple songs that children love to sing,
I worked my way, up to what Poets reach,
And tried to soar the Skies with my own wing!
And then I came to know what metre was;
And Rhythm melody of words and sounds;
And soon I was some kind of poetic-Boss;
And tried my skill of words in newer grounds!
The old was gold but people wanted new;
I had to write 'free verses' now and then;
My Sonnets sprung with speed and divine hue;
My Wings were strong enough to reach Heaven!
Believe-it-or-not, I'm World's Sonnet-King!
Each Sonnet was just a ten-minute thing!
Tatiana Salazar 2B
ReplyDelete"Love Sonnet"
Would you ever try to leave me
For somebody who deserves you more
Would you ever want me to let you be
Do you ever think about walking out that door
I'll give you all the love
And I'll give you all the gold
I'll give you a precious dove
Just give me your heart to hold
Please don't ever leave me
My love I need you
I wont hurt you you will see
I don't want to lose you because like you there are few
Just stay with me forever
and leave me never
Rashad Richardson 2B
ReplyDeleteRoses are red
Violets are blue
All that runs through my head
Are thoughts of you
You make me smile
Every time you're around
And when you aren't for a while
I start to feel down
Why you're so lovely
I can't explain that
You say that you love me
And I say the same back
Without you I would be lonely
Because all I need is you and you only
"Departed"
ReplyDeleteWhy are we here?
I don't understand
The time is almost near
When we let go our hands
Thinking back on the times we had
Our love was so strong
You met my mom and dad
Now our love is singing a sad song
movies and dates that was all great
Thinking how it went wrong
We got to make it work fore our family sake
We thought our love would stay strong
But now it ends with all these sighs
Its about that time to say good bye
CliftonWhite2b
“Tension”
ReplyDeleteThe times we bump heads and argue
The reason will always be dumb
At the end of the day I will always love you.
Times were the pain is numb.
The night’s when I cried
The night’s when I cut
Forgiveness I tried
This relationship is pure luck.
Days we laugh and smile
Days we avoid and ignore
Feels like it’s a complete miss trial
The pain and hate I pour
Our relationship is on the rocks
Tick tock away with the clocks
Tim Tebow Period2B
ReplyDeleteTerrell Kornegay, nice playgirism. Did you give credit to Dr.John Celes? (http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/sonnet-my-poetic-evolution/) You know people go to jail over this right? Oh, and it was easy to catch, "Believe-it-or-not, I'm World's Sonnet-King!" that's the line you put into google.