Monday, February 6, 2012

Week 24 Blog 2B: Writing Sonnets

This week you're going to write your third poem for your project, which will be a rough draft of a sonnet.  Here's what you need to know about sonnets:



What is a sonnet?
  = 14 line poem
  = little song in Italian; originated in Italy
  = subject is often ROMANTIC LOVE
What is an English/Shakespearean sonnet?
  =Fixed structure (three quatrainsabab, cdcd, efef; followed by one coupletgg

TASK: Write a sonnet about the subject of love. It needs to be 14 lines and should use the rhyme scheme above that we talked about in class. Use the poems we read in class as your models to follow when you write your own. Remember, this is a "write-like" poem, so you should try to write like the authors of the poems below. Your poem should pose a question/situation/problem, a turning point, and a resolution - just like the sonnets did that we read in class. Post your poem in the comment section below, and send to Mr. Sabath via email (peter.sabath@pgcps.org):


Sonnet 18
Shakespeare

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? 

Thou art more lovely and more temperate:

Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
 
And summer's lease hath all too short a date: 

Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,

And often is his gold complexion dimm'd; 

And every fair from fair sometime declines,

By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;

But thy eternal summer shall not fade

Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest;

Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,

When in eternal lines to time thou growest: 

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,

So long lives this and this gives life to thee.

Sonnet 30
Edna St. Vincent Millay

Love is not all: it is not meat nor drink
Nor slumber nor a roof against the rain;
Nor yet a floating spar to men that sink
And rise and sink and rise and sink again;
Love cannot fill the thickened lung with breath,
Nor clean the blood, nor set the fractured bone;
Yet many a man is making friends with death
Even as I speak, for lack of love alone.
It well may be that in a difficult hour,
Pinned down by pain and moaning for release,
Or nagged by want past resolution’s power,
I might be driven to sell your love for peace,
Or trade the memory of this night for food.
It well may be. But I do not think I would.







26 comments:

  1. William(Be Easy)Martin Period2B
    Sonnet "40"
    Exercise is not that important, is it?
    We can't chew it or drink it until we're bloated,
    It can't be fryed making my mouth water with spit,
    I could eat for sport, my pockets soon loaded.
    Visions of loneliness and wheelchairs haunt me,
    Nightmares of I being the one consumed,
    Up out of bed sprinting for the key,
    To unlock the doors of hope or life is doomed,
    Lifting wieghts here and there,
    Counting points and measuring meals,
    Aeorobics and Cardio I do my share,
    Opening up a package of fresh veils,
    Eat forever and grow out of my pants,
    Exercise I will! For fear of ants!

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  2. Sunlight drips between dappled leaves at dawn,
    As the path gently gleams bathed in night’s dew,
    In splendor we two hand in hand walk on,
    Every day learning to love anew.

    Radiance grows as quickly the sun climbs,
    So idly we dwell along bubbling brooks,
    In a far away world a church bell chimes,
    And fades in the midst of the lovers’ looks.

    We tire as we watch afternoon pass,
    We head away as the shadows grow long,
    We hear wind whistle through the deep green grass,
    We know as day passes, this is our song.

    Still, as the light fades and darkness takes all,
    We walk as one in the forest of Fall.

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  3. DominiqueBoxleyFrom2BFebruary 11, 2012 at 10:22 AM

    We sit there in the noisy room with the lights dim
    Holding hands blushing hard with no words said
    Wondering what he's thinking as I stare at him
    Looking in his eyes, I can tell my heart is not being misled

    Music surronds us, but we can't hear a thing
    Everyone's on the floor dancing but we're totally blind
    It feels like he's the angel to my wing
    And as our fingers entertwine

    I think to myself I could spend a lifetime here
    Just you and me and no one else
    But if things between us change my dear
    Will you be so quick as to leave me for someone else ?

    Then my hearing returns for a second just to hear your lips whisper "I love you"
    And just like that my dubts fade; I know in my heart this is the right thing to do.

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  4. Such little time, whatever shall I do?
    Playing around,telling stories, or talking about nothing.
    It doesn't matter as long as I am with you.
    That's when I hear the footsteps shuffling.

    We look at each other in disbelief.
    Hoping and praying wishing for the best.
    Then the door opens and we both sigh sigh's of relief.
    Nothing more than a little pest.

    Back to what we were doing.
    The two of us go.
    The pest went away with shooing.
    Now back to the show.

    Our lives and love as strong as time.
    Forever it goes and we pay it no mind.

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  5. Does he even know that I am here?
    Im the one who reveals myslef
    when everyone else seems to disapear
    im always the one to help

    I realize that I cant help you
    because you dont want to be helped
    just know that when I say "I love you too"
    that is truely how I felt

    But i cant imagine me leaving you alone
    but you dont like to speak your mind
    its like were taking the long way home
    it is a waste of time

    but in my mind, I'll always be yours
    Im just waiting on you to realize that you are my world

    Nekia Williams 2B

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  7. Marcus Moss 2b
    That love where you know its real

    That feeling you get when she is in your presence.
    Now its my job to please her, ease her, and make her smile.
    Is it just me or am I going crazy over her essesce.
    This is our love and its going to last longer than a while.

    Late nights wasting time talking about nothing on the phone.
    Your best interent is nothing but to better each other.
    Always wishing to be together high off love and bold enough to sneak out your own home.
    She bad, we the sh*t, we does this, and we know what we got there aint another.

    Always hugging, kissing, cuddling doing whatever to express how you feel.
    Having fun with each other doing anything to make us remember OUR time.
    Sometimes we check to make sure its real on both ends of the deal.
    I make sure to say and make her know she going to be forever mines.

    This be that romantic love, that forever love, yeah its one of a kind.
    We break up to make up knowing the other going to come be in little time

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  8. Janie Pratt 2B

    Running away from all of my fears
    chasing the love I thought we had
    pillow full of tears
    never knew it would all hurt so bad

    I didnt plan to be feeling all this here
    these tears aint nothing
    just company to my ocean full of tears
    soon you'll get what's coming

    Im out of tears
    so there's nomore crying
    finally f-cked my fears
    and broke up with my lies

    and til this day i scream F love
    nobody in this world will ever be enough

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  9. Charles owens-wilson 2B

    You filled my life with joy,
    Made my nights so memorable.
    Now everything is so destroyed,
    I hate that it's unforgetable.
    You had my heart,
    that you tore apart
    never thought i would feel this way
    i think about it almost everyday
    i pray and pray
    until the sky turns grey
    through all this pain
    i still remain
    to have enormous feelings for you
    i feel like a fool
    but i just dont know what to do.

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  10. Fatima Ahmed 2B

    Have you always loved me?
    Your always here when i need you the most
    You always made me see clearly
    Even cut the crust off my toast

    I've loved you since the first day we met
    You filled my heart with joy
    But now my heart is filled with regret
    How could i not see i was just your little toy

    My heart always belonged to you
    I wondered how you couldn't see that
    I always thought you loved me too
    More then you loved your favorite hat

    I'm happy with times that were rotten
    Because now those days are long forgotten

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  11. Juwan Whitaker 2B
    "Sonnet 14"
    I escaped down to the creek today .
    I lost my way and wished you would come
    I sat down on the grass in the sun,
    In the silence I began to pray .
    In the water some stepping stones lay
    where my reflections just had begun .
    Your presence I felt had overcome,
    I was not lost and alone that day .
    I walked away and stood on a stone .
    In the water I saw the blue sky.
    You came to me in a quiet place.
    In reflective prayer I'm not alone
    with the sound of water flowing by,
    on stepping stones I walk in Gods grace

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  12. Tim Tebow Period2B

    Kiaa Hamilton, nice playgirism. Did you give credit to Matthew Khan? (http://www.helium.com/items/2168896-love-sonnet) You know people go to jail over this right? Oh, and it was easy to catch, you don't know what dappled means.

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  13. Tim Tebow Period2B

    Juwan Whitacker, nice playgirism. Did you give credit to Paul Francis Mccann? (http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewPoetry.asp?id=26191)
    You know people go to jail over this right? Oh, and it was easy to catch, you don't know what "reflective prayer" is.

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  14. LOL JUWAN GOT CAUGHT !

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  15. Alexia Strickland 2B
    "US"

    Like A Dove You Flew Through My Heart
    Giving Me Reasons To Believe
    Our Love Would Never Depart
    But Then You Changed On Me

    Love Turned To Lies
    Then Came Deceit And Pain
    You Never Heard My Cries
    Our Love Soon Turned Vein

    You Changed Your ways
    like a 360 spin
    Laughs turned to rage
    i wondered when would this end

    Please Change For Me Because I Love You So Much
    Go To How you used to be or there will be no US

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  16. Alexus Unique` Parker Period 2Bday

    "Tainted Love"

    Beauty and all she promises,
    Barefoot, walking on pavements of broken glass.
    Love and it 's tainted kiss,
    Wondering why love never lasts.

    Suspended by the thinnest thread a thousand feet in the air,
    Scared to fall as love's poisonus venom flows through my veins.
    Afraid of the affection as you whisper in my ear.
    Unknowingly being lured in the direction of Cupid's aim.

    Although loving you could take my life,
    I place my hand in the palm of yours.
    As our hearts become tangled, yours into mine,
    I feel a shock of electricity that pierces me to the core.

    The wind blows and I paint the colors of this tainted love,
    I close my eyes and suddenly the heavens open from above.

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  17. Kiera Jones 2B

    Love is warm and cozy
    Like hot soup on a cold winter day
    Love is red and rosey
    Like fresh picked flowers that make a beautiful bouquet

    A person that makes you smile
    Just to hear their voice
    You would walk a mile
    To see them if that was your only choice

    It's not always that easy
    You have to be willing to take the good with the bad
    Sometimes it's like a gloomy day that's breezy
    And you go to sleep mad

    If you're smart you'll learn to compromise
    So you won't be lonely when you're old and wise

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  18. Earl Childress 2B
    Our love is so fine
    Since 8.5.11 when we got together
    Everything has been PURE like wine
    Baby you make my life better

    Love is sour
    Love is sweet
    Love is ours
    It's that love you just can't beat

    Your heart is mine
    My heart is yours
    I love you all the time
    You love me like chocolate on smores

    Our love? Yeah it's forever
    Will it end? NO! Not NEVER!!!!

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  19. Is this all real?
    I didn't think it was possible that I could get you
    Who knew you would be apart of the deal
    I guess wishes do come true

    Your not like the rest
    The ones that I did have were bad
    You seem like the best
    You never seem to make me mad

    My love before has been abused
    I want what we have to last forever
    But this time I don't want to be used
    The last guy got caught because he wasn't that clever

    This time around we'll both stay true
    With me baby, You'll be stuck like glue

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  20. "That Feeling"

    What am I supposed to do?
    Staring at me with those beautiful eyes.
    I think I might be falling for you!
    Oh! I am feeling something weird inside!
    When we met each other on the street,
    You walked next to me (I thought I was going to die).
    You looked at me and I looked down at my feet.
    I wanted to run away and hide.
    Should I stop thinking about you?
    This love on my shoulders weighs a ton.
    Staying in this empty house alone with nothing to do
    Picking petals off of a flower one by one.
    No more games. you will soon see,
    That us meeting was destiny.

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  21. Terrell Kornegay 2B

    From easy rhymes that kinder-gardeners learn,
    And simple songs that children love to sing,
    I worked my way, up to what Poets reach,
    And tried to soar the Skies with my own wing!

    And then I came to know what metre was;
    And Rhythm melody of words and sounds;
    And soon I was some kind of poetic-Boss;
    And tried my skill of words in newer grounds!

    The old was gold but people wanted new;
    I had to write 'free verses' now and then;
    My Sonnets sprung with speed and divine hue;
    My Wings were strong enough to reach Heaven!

    Believe-it-or-not, I'm World's Sonnet-King!
    Each Sonnet was just a ten-minute thing!

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  22. Tatiana Salazar 2B

    "Love Sonnet"

    Would you ever try to leave me
    For somebody who deserves you more
    Would you ever want me to let you be
    Do you ever think about walking out that door

    I'll give you all the love
    And I'll give you all the gold
    I'll give you a precious dove
    Just give me your heart to hold

    Please don't ever leave me
    My love I need you
    I wont hurt you you will see
    I don't want to lose you because like you there are few

    Just stay with me forever
    and leave me never

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  23. Rashad Richardson 2B

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    All that runs through my head
    Are thoughts of you

    You make me smile
    Every time you're around
    And when you aren't for a while
    I start to feel down

    Why you're so lovely
    I can't explain that
    You say that you love me
    And I say the same back

    Without you I would be lonely
    Because all I need is you and you only

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  24. "Departed"

    Why are we here?
    I don't understand
    The time is almost near
    When we let go our hands

    Thinking back on the times we had
    Our love was so strong
    You met my mom and dad
    Now our love is singing a sad song

    movies and dates that was all great
    Thinking how it went wrong
    We got to make it work fore our family sake
    We thought our love would stay strong

    But now it ends with all these sighs
    Its about that time to say good bye


    CliftonWhite2b

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  25. “Tension”
    The times we bump heads and argue
    The reason will always be dumb
    At the end of the day I will always love you.
    Times were the pain is numb.

    The night’s when I cried
    The night’s when I cut
    Forgiveness I tried
    This relationship is pure luck.

    Days we laugh and smile
    Days we avoid and ignore
    Feels like it’s a complete miss trial
    The pain and hate I pour

    Our relationship is on the rocks
    Tick tock away with the clocks

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  26. Tim Tebow Period2B

    Terrell Kornegay, nice playgirism. Did you give credit to Dr.John Celes? (http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/sonnet-my-poetic-evolution/) You know people go to jail over this right? Oh, and it was easy to catch, "Believe-it-or-not, I'm World's Sonnet-King!" that's the line you put into google.

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