This week you're going to write your third poem for your project, which will be a rough draft of a sonnet. Here's what you need to know about sonnets:
•What is a sonnet?
= 14 line poem
= “little song” in Italian; originated in Italy
= subject is often ROMANTIC LOVE
•What is an English/Shakespearean sonnet?
=Fixed structure (three quatrains – abab, cdcd, efef; followed by one couplet – gg
TASK: Write a sonnet about the subject of love. It needs to be 14 lines and should use the rhyme scheme above that we talked about in class. Use the poems we read in class as your models to follow when you write your own. Remember, this is a "write-like" poem, so you should try to write like the authors of the poems below. Your poem should pose a question/situation/problem, a turning point, and a resolution - just like the sonnets did that we read in class. Post your poem in the comment section below, and send to Mr. Sabath via email (peter.sabath@pgcps.org):
TASK: Write a sonnet about the subject of love. It needs to be 14 lines and should use the rhyme scheme above that we talked about in class. Use the poems we read in class as your models to follow when you write your own. Remember, this is a "write-like" poem, so you should try to write like the authors of the poems below. Your poem should pose a question/situation/problem, a turning point, and a resolution - just like the sonnets did that we read in class. Post your poem in the comment section below, and send to Mr. Sabath via email (peter.sabath@pgcps.org):
Sonnet 18
Shakespeare
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimm'd;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest;
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this and this gives life to thee.
Sonnet 30
Edna St. Vincent Millay
Love is not all: it is not meat nor drink
Nor slumber nor a roof against the rain;
Nor yet a floating spar to men that sink
And rise and sink and rise and sink again;
Love cannot fill the thickened lung with breath,
Nor clean the blood, nor set the fractured bone;
Yet many a man is making friends with death
Even as I speak, for lack of love alone.
It well may be that in a difficult hour,
Pinned down by pain and moaning for release,
Or nagged by want past resolution’s power,
I might be driven to sell your love for peace,
Or trade the memory of this night for food.
It well may be. But I do not think I would.
A special world for you and me
ReplyDeleteA special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.
And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.
Edmond 3A
Sonnet 1
ReplyDeleteShall I compare the to a new video game?
Can I just play you until the game end
That situation I must apprehend
Some of the levels are real easy
Lots of people tell me your quite sleazy.
I’m going through the levels nice and steady
Now go upstairs and get ready
Gamers play from far and wide
I see you over there y must you hide
The people online act real dumb
Sometimes in the morning you smell like a bum
The battery in my remote will die out
Rite now I want to scream and shout
To my friends online we will get through
To you baby I bid you a du
Kedejae Smith3A
ReplyDeleteNever wanted to be somebody’s baby momma
But when you really think about it,
what girl would wanna
Sit around a raise a child all on her own
Like me that's why I im still here.
Just like my mother
Raised me and my brother
That why I love her
Cause she’s tougher and those
busters couldn’t touch her
But lord I know she suffered
And right now I just continue to
struggle of being a strong mother
on my hustle.
If you’re the only one that
takes care of home
Then girl you’re a superwoman
If the daddy done left you alone
"What is love? 'Tis not hereafter,
ReplyDeletePresent mirth hath present laughter", says William.
Up & down, up & down the waves will go
whisper sweet nothings that thee shall not know.
Have I mentioned,
you have my attention?
What makes Me smile?! You vibrant style.
When your armed
with your charm, I'm helpless I say
no one could ever take me away.
Adieu Adieu to you i could say
Adieu Adieu, O no you should stay.
Breanna Vaden 3A
athilus-baguida 3A
ReplyDeleteShall dusk has come, down long gone
the moon is halfway there
my legs shake, my arms shake
the bright flies ar almost here
the jars are ready
the nets are willing
to carry their own weight
my legs guake, my arm shake
the bright flies are almost here
the old man, the young girl
with whom both I relate.
they hunch over, antiupate
fromen joy on their face
our legs tremble, our arms guake
the bright flie are almost here
the old man, the young girl
with whom I both relate.
Baby your love i need in my life
ReplyDeleteBut if you dont love me right
Then...Then just stab me with the knife
your body is like a dove flying in the night
Bright.. are your eyes that see right through my soul
piercing your love is stabbing me rapediatlly
But if your love fails my heart will turn to coal
My heart needs your love asap emediatlly
Worth more than anything your beautiful
But mess this up once
And ill leave you hanging like a qutical
With out you baby i am a dunce
Love without you is like being a fish out of water
I love you so love me back dont make the situation harder
Daris Hodge 3A
Baby when we are together all we do is fly
ReplyDeletewhen your not with me i stay upon the ground
some nights i just want to cry
other times i just dont make a sound
lets be here together
and not just tonight
I want to make you my forever
and never feel like im living a lie
if its not going to work just tell me
so that i dont look stupid
we should just let it be
and lets listen to lloyd cupid
we will never know whats next
baby lets just have sex
Davon Parker 3A
ReplyDeleteHow often is it when two people fall in love,
One of them is forced to move away?
We can't convince our hearts that they must move;
In people love just doesn't work that way.
All the love I feel for you,
Life will be an wound.
Love will shadow everything I do.
Missing you, my heart will be marooned.
In time, of course, my feelings will adjust;
Such pain cannot forever be sustained.
Some visits, letters, phone calls will, I trust,
Yearnings quell, and grades must be maintained.
Oh, but I will miss you, miss you dearly
Until hell ends, I'll be existing merely.
When we're together I feel so complete;
ReplyDeleteBut when we don't talk I feel so apart.
When i'm with you I just want to snuggle under the sheets;
When we don't talk I feel like i'm missing my heart.
Every time I see you its like we just met for the first time;
We connect like opposites attract.
And every time I yell at you it feels like I committed a crime.
But I love you and that's a fact.
I love spending time with you;
You hate when I mess up your hair.
And you like when I give you big hugs and i like it too;
And deep down inside you know i really care.
When we fight we always make-up.
And the one thing I promised you is we will never break-up.
Startled by the affection you portray
ReplyDeleteit is, what it is and without a doubt its true
that the love I show you on this day
is nothing but smooth rhythm and blues
you brighten my world when i look in your eyes
so focused with everything you do
matter of fact without you my sun will not rise
this is love girl, i'm not a fool
daydreaming of future events that can possibly occur
however, sometimes this world today is a great mistake
but our love is not foggy or blurred
because the love we share is at our own pace
Don't be fooled by how precise they cross their T's and dot their J's
because on this day I want to put a dot after the Y and say Happy Valentine's day.
Edmond 3A