Monday, February 6, 2012

Week 24 Blog 3A: Writing Sonnets

This week you're going to write your third poem for your project, which will be a rough draft of a sonnet.  Here's what you need to know about sonnets:

What is a sonnet?
  = 14 line poem
  = little song in Italian; originated in Italy
  = subject is often ROMANTIC LOVE
What is an English/Shakespearean sonnet?
  =Fixed structure (three quatrains – ababcdcdefef; followed by one couplet – gg


TASK: Write a sonnet about the subject of love. It needs to be 14 lines and should use the rhyme scheme above that we talked about in class. Use the poems we read in class as your models to follow when you write your own. Remember, this is a "write-like" poem, so you should try to write like the authors of the poems below. Your poem should pose a question/situation/problem, a turning point, and a resolution - just like the sonnets did that we read in class. Post your poem in the comment section below, and send to Mr. Sabath via email (peter.sabath@pgcps.org):



Sonnet 18
Shakespeare

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? 

Thou art more lovely and more temperate:

Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
 
And summer's lease hath all too short a date: 

Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,

And often is his gold complexion dimm'd; 

And every fair from fair sometime declines,

By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;

But thy eternal summer shall not fade

Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest;

Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,

When in eternal lines to time thou growest: 

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,

So long lives this and this gives life to thee.

Sonnet 30
Edna St. Vincent Millay

Love is not all: it is not meat nor drink
Nor slumber nor a roof against the rain;
Nor yet a floating spar to men that sink
And rise and sink and rise and sink again;
Love cannot fill the thickened lung with breath,
Nor clean the blood, nor set the fractured bone;
Yet many a man is making friends with death
Even as I speak, for lack of love alone.
It well may be that in a difficult hour,
Pinned down by pain and moaning for release,
Or nagged by want past resolution’s power,
might be driven to sell your love for peace,
Or trade the memory of this night for food.
It well may be. But I do not think I would.



10 comments:

  1. A special world for you and me
    A special bond one cannot see
    It wraps us up in its cocoon
    And holds us fiercely in its womb.

    Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
    Gently nestling us to the fold
    Like silken thread it holds us fast
    Bonds like this are meant to last.

    And though at times a thread may break
    A new one forms in its wake
    To bind us closer and keep us strong
    In a special world, where we belong.



    Edmond 3A

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  2. Delonte Washington 3AFebruary 7, 2012 at 7:13 PM

    Sonnet 1

    Shall I compare the to a new video game?
    Can I just play you until the game end
    That situation I must apprehend
    Some of the levels are real easy
    Lots of people tell me your quite sleazy.

    I’m going through the levels nice and steady
    Now go upstairs and get ready
    Gamers play from far and wide
    I see you over there y must you hide

    The people online act real dumb
    Sometimes in the morning you smell like a bum
    The battery in my remote will die out
    Rite now I want to scream and shout

    To my friends online we will get through
    To you baby I bid you a du

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  3. Kedejae Smith3A

    Never wanted to be somebody’s baby momma
    But when you really think about it,
    what girl would wanna
    Sit around a raise a child all on her own
    Like me that's why I im still here.

    Just like my mother
    Raised me and my brother
    That why I love her
    Cause she’s tougher and those
    busters couldn’t touch her
    But lord I know she suffered
    And right now I just continue to
    struggle of being a strong mother
    on my hustle.

    If you’re the only one that
    takes care of home
    Then girl you’re a superwoman
    If the daddy done left you alone

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  4. "What is love? 'Tis not hereafter,
    Present mirth hath present laughter", says William.
    Up & down, up & down the waves will go
    whisper sweet nothings that thee shall not know.
    Have I mentioned,
    you have my attention?
    What makes Me smile?! You vibrant style.
    When your armed
    with your charm, I'm helpless I say
    no one could ever take me away.
    Adieu Adieu to you i could say
    Adieu Adieu, O no you should stay.

    Breanna Vaden 3A

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  5. athilus-baguida 3A

    Shall dusk has come, down long gone
    the moon is halfway there
    my legs shake, my arms shake
    the bright flies ar almost here

    the jars are ready
    the nets are willing
    to carry their own weight
    my legs guake, my arm shake
    the bright flies are almost here

    the old man, the young girl
    with whom both I relate.
    they hunch over, antiupate
    fromen joy on their face
    our legs tremble, our arms guake
    the bright flie are almost here

    the old man, the young girl
    with whom I both relate.

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  6. Baby your love i need in my life
    But if you dont love me right
    Then...Then just stab me with the knife
    your body is like a dove flying in the night

    Bright.. are your eyes that see right through my soul
    piercing your love is stabbing me rapediatlly
    But if your love fails my heart will turn to coal
    My heart needs your love asap emediatlly

    Worth more than anything your beautiful
    But mess this up once
    And ill leave you hanging like a qutical
    With out you baby i am a dunce

    Love without you is like being a fish out of water
    I love you so love me back dont make the situation harder

    Daris Hodge 3A

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  7. Mathew Bourguignon 3AFebruary 12, 2012 at 12:44 PM

    Baby when we are together all we do is fly
    when your not with me i stay upon the ground
    some nights i just want to cry
    other times i just dont make a sound

    lets be here together
    and not just tonight
    I want to make you my forever
    and never feel like im living a lie

    if its not going to work just tell me
    so that i dont look stupid
    we should just let it be
    and lets listen to lloyd cupid

    we will never know whats next
    baby lets just have sex

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  8. Davon Parker 3A

    How often is it when two people fall in love,
    One of them is forced to move away?
    We can't convince our hearts that they must move;
    In people love just doesn't work that way.
    All the love I feel for you,
    Life will be an wound.
    Love will shadow everything I do.
    Missing you, my heart will be marooned.
    In time, of course, my feelings will adjust;
    Such pain cannot forever be sustained.
    Some visits, letters, phone calls will, I trust,
    Yearnings quell, and grades must be maintained.
    Oh, but I will miss you, miss you dearly
    Until hell ends, I'll be existing merely.

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  9. When we're together I feel so complete;
    But when we don't talk I feel so apart.
    When i'm with you I just want to snuggle under the sheets;
    When we don't talk I feel like i'm missing my heart.

    Every time I see you its like we just met for the first time;
    We connect like opposites attract.
    And every time I yell at you it feels like I committed a crime.
    But I love you and that's a fact.

    I love spending time with you;
    You hate when I mess up your hair.
    And you like when I give you big hugs and i like it too;
    And deep down inside you know i really care.

    When we fight we always make-up.
    And the one thing I promised you is we will never break-up.

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  10. Startled by the affection you portray
    it is, what it is and without a doubt its true
    that the love I show you on this day
    is nothing but smooth rhythm and blues

    you brighten my world when i look in your eyes
    so focused with everything you do
    matter of fact without you my sun will not rise
    this is love girl, i'm not a fool

    daydreaming of future events that can possibly occur
    however, sometimes this world today is a great mistake
    but our love is not foggy or blurred
    because the love we share is at our own pace

    Don't be fooled by how precise they cross their T's and dot their J's
    because on this day I want to put a dot after the Y and say Happy Valentine's day.


    Edmond 3A

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