Sunday, January 29, 2012

Week 23 Blog 3B: Another Write-Like Poem

TASK: Write a write-like poem using “The Taxi” or “Love Without Love” as your model. Last week’s poem should have been about a childhood memory involving platonic love between parent/child. This week’s poem should be about a reflection on the nature of romantic love. What does love mean to you?

Your poem can be rhymed or in free-verse. Post your poem in comments below, and also send a copy of it to Mr.Sabath via email.

Model Poems:

Love Without Love
-Luis Lloréns Torres

I love you, because in my thousand and one nights of dreams,
I Never once dreamed of you.
I looked down paths that traveled from afar,
but it was never you I expected.
Suddenly I've felt you flying through my soul
in quick , lofty flight,
and how beautiful you seem way up there, far
from my always idiot heart!
Love me that way, flying over everything.
And, like the bird on its branch, land in my arms
only to rest,
then fly off again.
Be not like the romantic one who,
In love, set me on fire.
When you climb up my mansion,
enter so lightly, that as you enter
the dog on my heart will not bark. 



The Taxi

BY AMY LOWELL
When I go away from you
The world beats dead
Like a slackened drum.
I call out for you against the jutted stars   
And shout into the ridges of the wind.   
Streets coming fast,
One after the other,
Wedge you away from me,
And the lamps of the city prick my eyes
So that I can no longer see your face.
Why should I leave you,
To wound myself upon the sharp edges of the night?


17 comments:

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  2. Aalisha Hardrick 3b
    What Does Love Mean ?
    What does love mean, This is one of the most asked questions. Love has turned into a concept to summarize how we experience new things you receive. It appears so easy to love all kinds of things these days. We are in a crazy dash for the really feel good factor and speedy gratification.

    Our day to day life is filled with ways to accomplish the easy solution by quickly buying into exactly what advertisers want us to purchase and love and not have the ability to do without.

    If you don’t know or love your own personal value you make one self dependent on the actual appreciation and love of people.

    The Image Of Love In My Perspective Is A Couple Walking On The Beach, Holding Hands, Talking About ANYTHING. On The Movies Were The Boyfriend/Husband Takes His Girlfriend/Wife Into The Water As He Romantically Holds Her They Look Into Her Eyes And Knows Its True Love.

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  3. Janee' Harris 3B
    Love Love Love
    when i think of you my sad nights turns into the happiest nights.
    I always dreamed that you was my king and i was your queen.
    Love Love Love is such powerful words.
    As i sit in the window,watching the rain pour down as if thoses were my tears,I always wonder what is the true meaning of love?

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  4. Jocelyn Iglesias , 3b
    Love.
    My nights grow weary when I don't have you.
    my only thoughts are of you nothing more,
    then a realization of my future.
    When I'm with you it's like I'm complete.
    I guess this is what Love means to me.

    My days get lonesome when your away,
    when I just sit and think of us.
    I never thought I'd fall so hard,
    I think this is what Love is supposed to be.

    Now your hear and I'm in awe,
    I never thought you'd be mine.
    I love the time we spend together,
    as if the world does not exist.
    I know now what Love is all about.

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  5. Marlyn Tyler 3B

    What does love mean?

    Love is when you have feelings for someone and you just cannot get them off of your mind. Love is when you trust someone and you will do anything for them. Love is giving your heart away to be loved by another in return.

    Cute Sexy Thing

    How beautiful you are
    A knock out by far
    You make my cloudy day turn to sunshine
    Girl, you are constantly on my mind
    Eyes as blue as the rain
    Ignites my internal flame.

    When I see you, my heart skips a beat
    I can feel our heat
    Chills go up and down my spine
    Girl, you are so fine.

    My love for you makes my heart throttle
    You should be the next top model
    Long wavy black hair
    We make a lovely pair.

    Your sweet laughter makes me happy
    My day gets better instead of crappy
    I enjoy your beautiful smile
    I could sit and watch you for a while.

    You send sparks through my heart
    Girl, you are a work of art
    Love and happiness is what you bring
    You cute sexy thing.

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  6. Sharese Zanders 3B
    What is Love?

    Love is when I want to be around you forever. It's when I see you and all my frowns turns into smiles.

    It's when I can't stop thinking about you. It's when I lose you and all I shed is tears.

    Love is you and I together as one.

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  7. Leah Webb:3B

    You are my description of love
    You are my description of friend
    You are my description of everything
    You are my description of beginning to end.

    You have put me on a pedestal
    You make me feel ten feet tall
    You've always been there for me
    You've loved me through it all.

    You've stood by me through thick and thin
    You've always been patient and kind
    Just thought I'd let you know
    You're the owner of this heart of mine.

    So you ask how long I'll love you
    Well this is what I have to say
    Past, present, future, always
    Forever and a day!

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  8. Tamia Pardlow Period:3B

    What Is Love?

    I Can't Pretend Like I Know What Love Is,
    For Me Or For Anybody But I Know How
    It Feels For Me. When Your All I Think About
    That's Love, When I Still Feel Butterflies In My Stomach
    Everytime Im Around You That's Love.

    When All My Bad Days Become The Best Days
    I Ever Had That's Love.
    When Im Around You And All I Could Do Is Smile
    That's Love, When I Reread Every Text Message
    That You Send Me That's Love.

    I Could Sit Here And Talk About How Love Makes Me Feel,
    But Words Can't Explain Or Describe How It Feels
    When Your In Love, You Will Know How It Feels
    And It Will Be The Best Feeling Ever.

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  9. Michael Brown 3B
    Love Means That You're With A Person That You Want To Spend Your Life With Love Is SomeThing That You Feel When You Are Around That Special Person And You Know What You're In For Love To Me Is Sharing Emotions With That Certain In Your Life.

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    1. Diana Guerrero-Martinez 3B
      Every day I wake up with an illusion to give you my love.
      If you ever feel alone always know that al be there for you.
      When you’re not by my side my heart yells I miss you.

      And if I ever loose you just keep in mind that no matter what you do or who you are with. This crazy little heart will always love you. Even though I’m just 15 I’m over here talking about love like if I had a clue of what it really is.
      Because when I hear my mother is giving me advised about life I think to myself that after all that life has thrown at her I can say that she truly has found love because I see her happy and proud of what she has accomplish with the love of her life.
      I know that in order for me to say that I have found love with that special person who I would spend the rest of my life with I may have to meet many people in my life other than the one I Love now which is why I say that what I feel for you I just a simple illusion.

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  10. Darius Richardson 3B

    Love Is ...

    Love is the greatest feeling,
    Love is like a play,
    Love is what I feel for you,
    Each and every day,
    Love is like a smile,
    Love is like a song,
    Love is a great emotion,
    That keeps us going strong,
    I love you with my heart,
    My body and my soul,
    I love the way I keep loving,
    Like a love I can't control,
    So remember when your eyes meet mine,
    I love you with all my heart,
    And I have poured my entire soul into you,
    Right from the very start.

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  11. Ardejuh Davis, 3b

    You are my love
    You are my family
    You are my friend
    You are my heart

    Your always there when needed
    Your there through the thickest moments
    Your truely someone to remember

    I pour myself out to you
    Thats why you are my love

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  12. Javoina williams 3B
    Ever Wonder

    Ever wonder why my love is true, just
    like the star that hides
    behind the moon;ever wonder why
    the stars in the sky shoot across the brightly
    lit night and the clouds part as
    you drift away.

    The leaves fall to a whisper at your feet,the
    trees bow to your honor, and the birds
    chirp whenever you are near,but just like you,
    I always wonder have you ever think
    why my love to you is true.

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  13. Shiesha Beale 3B : LOVE
    Love comes from family, friends, or anybody
    Love is strong, weak, hard, soft
    ,temporary and also long lasting.
    Some is at first sight or over the time,
    But as long as you have it,
    You can give it to others.

    You don't have to be in a relationship,
    You can be kind , mean , or even bipolar
    Just to love someone.

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  14. I Wish
    By: Jennifer Canenguez 3B

    I lie on the ground,
    and stare into space,
    the stars start to move,
    into the shape of your face.

    I see you there now,
    looking down at me,
    with that cute little smile,
    that I like to see.

    You say "close your eyes",
    "tell me what you see",
    I see only two people,
    just you and me.

    We're walking the shoreline,
    with our feet getting wet,
    the horizon turns pink,
    as the sun starts to set.

    Oh I wish I could be,
    in that one special place,
    as I lie on the ground,
    and I stare into space...

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  15. Jocelyn Colbert 3B

    I can't pretend as if I know what love is
    I am so interested and invested in this thing
    thats what more then a fling.

    Is what you and I have a thing or just a little
    fling, Is this love, no really what is love?

    Have I mentioned you have all my attention,
    with your vibrant style that makes me smile,
    Is this love, no really what is love?

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  16. Jennell Jones 3b
    I stare up in the sky
    Looking at the clouds slowly fade away
    I can see different shapes
    Everything is starting to look like your face

    I don't know what love is
    But your constantly on my mind
    I like it when I see you laugh and smile

    Love may have some ups and downs
    I can be sure that there will be no frowns
    Love can be at first sight
    Maybe even like riding a bike

    I don't know what love is but I know
    I don't want to lose you

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